tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3306832955136970820.post815447240915275761..comments2011-07-27T20:44:11.845+03:00Comments on <br><br><br>Moments Illuminate: AbundanceMagical Ms. Mhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09594444785515534365noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3306832955136970820.post-16760396650357764062011-07-17T22:25:16.759+03:002011-07-17T22:25:16.759+03:00Welcome back.
You get your reader curious about J...Welcome back. <br />You get your reader curious about Jane by mentioning the objects she has. Where will you go next from here? More about the moving? Her travels? Her relationship with her mom?Terje https://www.blogger.com/profile/13569210226711674834noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3306832955136970820.post-19716296472685514362011-07-13T07:10:02.992+03:002011-07-13T07:10:02.992+03:00Be sure that each detail you've written has a ...Be sure that each detail you've written has a reason to be there, a plan for further action.Linda Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14983144542632353870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3306832955136970820.post-40337747014209272622011-07-13T07:08:09.200+03:002011-07-13T07:08:09.200+03:00You could give us the links to other pieces when y...You could give us the links to other pieces when you share a new one. I'm interested, and want to know why Jane said they're interesting stories? With just your few lines, I want to know more.Linda Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14983144542632353870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3306832955136970820.post-42241207007962037892011-07-13T05:44:04.964+03:002011-07-13T05:44:04.964+03:00I love that your snippet, so short yet so jam-pack...I love that your snippet, so short yet so jam-packed, inspires so much wonderment. I wonder about the stories and want to know more about them. Why did Jane move to a new place? Does Jane travel solo? I look forward to finding out more about this character.Mardiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12237463317290624819noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3306832955136970820.post-5442550906514703232011-07-13T04:04:01.761+03:002011-07-13T04:04:01.761+03:00Now I shall have to go and read about Sarah in pas...Now I shall have to go and read about Sarah in past posts...<br />Why has Jane traveled so much? Or is someone else traveling and sending her these things? I'll be back later. Perhaps with some answers after reading more.Donna Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13738281869266957726noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3306832955136970820.post-90619434739062733802011-07-13T04:01:17.807+03:002011-07-13T04:01:17.807+03:00Another snippet from your fictional characters, I&...Another snippet from your fictional characters, I've wondered what they've been up to for these last few months. I hope you will continue to treat us to these slices. I like the idea of portable art.elsiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01348895330633879894noreply@blogger.com