I love this poem - especially the line being "stretched by the angle of the light" and the idea that there is more to see when you pay attention
You are very wise with a thought provoking slice. I've given it quite a bit of thought. I like it. There is a picture in my mind as I read it. Creative and innovative! Keep slicing! I'll be checking again! :)
Woah, what a powerful poem. I love how you connected the shadow to yourself. Nice work! --Jee Young
Short and thought provoking. I am still puzzled by the last line. I am looking forward to more writing, and not just on Tuesdays.Terje
Thank you for your positive response. I invite you to also challenge me. What would you say to a student?